I liked the background of the show. It was short and easy to follow for someone who has never seen the show. I liked the pictures and the links seemed appropriate. Although, the grammar errors were distracting. I liked that you talked about the current relationship statues of Bones and Booth. The tone of the article is very calm and flows easily. There were some statements that seems unfinished or left me asked "What did she mean?"
You thoroughly addressed all important information and connected it to the main theme overall. Really well put together, professional, and easy to read and understand. I personally felt a connection because I love the show, and the things you addressed drew me in and made me think "Oh yeah, I know what you mean!" A reader who's never seen the show before as well as devoted fans would be able to connect and clearly understand. Also, your enthusiasm and positive reaction to the episode as a whole is well represented throughout. In addition, you had a very thorough and descriptive outlook. - Samantha C
I liked the background of the show. It was short and easy to follow for someone who has never seen the show. I liked the pictures and the links seemed appropriate. Although, the grammar errors were distracting. I liked that you talked about the current relationship statues of Bones and Booth. The tone of the article is very calm and flows easily. There were some statements that seems unfinished or left me asked "What did she mean?"
ReplyDeleteYou thoroughly addressed all important information and connected it to the main theme overall. Really well put together, professional, and easy to read and understand. I personally felt a connection because I love the show, and the things you addressed drew me in and made me think "Oh yeah, I know what you mean!"
ReplyDeleteA reader who's never seen the show before as well as devoted fans would be able to connect and clearly understand. Also, your enthusiasm and positive reaction to the episode as a whole is well represented throughout. In addition, you had a very thorough and descriptive outlook.
- Samantha C